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A work of fiction, though not at all devoid of fact,
A work of pain, of suffering locked behind an act,

These are my words, not spoken lightly,
This is my story, please don't read it so quietly,
This is a display, of all those that have lost,
Of untried villains, and innocents counting the cost,

A work of fact, though not at all devoid of fiction,
A work of suffering, of pain melded with friction,

These are the words, of retorts harshly spoken,
This is an account, of a travesty in motion,
This is to show, fact and fiction are the same,
They just work by a different melody, with a sliding scale of blame
©2005-2009 ~TaintedEcho
:icontaintedecho:

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Another open and type attempt.

Don't know where I got the name, it just popped into my head...

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wow this is amazing, so going on my favs!

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O Divine Master Grant That I May Not So Much Seek To Be Consoled As To Console, To Be Understood As To Understand, To Be Loved As To Love - Sarah Mclachlan :heart:
:iconbreaksandspills:
:) your very welcome

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O Divine Master Grant That I May Not So Much Seek To Be Consoled As To Console, To Be Understood As To Understand, To Be Loved As To Love - Sarah Mclachlan :heart:
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nicely done. it has overtones of your life does it? the only thing is this line "This is my story, please don't read it so quietly" seems a bit too long. maybe cut out the so?

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Buffy: Angel
Angel: Buffy
Xander: Xander
:icontaintedecho:
I dunno, kinda works for me, it fits in my head...

And in places indeed it does, other parts are made from nonsense for the same purpose lol

Thanks for commenting :D

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